Jack's Folio

Throughout my drafts there were many major and minor changes to my introduction, my sources integrated, and my sentence structure. In my analysis of the multiple drafts I will show evidence of revision within different parts of my paper. Next i will start with showing the ideas from my classmates help improve my work. From then i will show growth through my homework assignments in my blog posts. Then i will show my comments on other classmate’s essays, aiding them…

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Gee refresher

Copy every sentence that contains quotation, summary, and paraphrase Paraphrase Only to later become a literacy winner due to overcoming this problem and setting them better off.  Only to become a literacy winner later due to overcoming their problem and learning from it. (342) This revision helps the reader make sense of the point i am making rather than having to read it multiple times to understand it. The shifting that Williams is talking about comes from idea that sponsors are the…

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