Straying away from our more normal route of work in English 123a, these texts gave the students in the class something unique to analyze and understand. The first text being an article about Feminism and its different forms and along with section in one of our books that helps with understanding elements of Literature. Bringing in two very different types of articles this gave us room to develop and apply ideas that go along with what we as writers think…
Annotations Miller and Jurecic Questioning Understanding Text to Self Craig Fehrman Challenging Understanding Question Part 2 2) When reading through Craig Fehrman’s article, I noticed that as use of technology became more apparent, revision started to become more advanced also. As Fehrman describes the timeline of authors using: multiple paper drafts as revision, if located in London the printing press, next comes the type writer which required the whole paper to be thrown away rather…
When looking over my draft, there were multiple things that I would change to make it a better product. Some evidence that I need to include in final draft is from the Miller and Jurecic’s text to support my claim on And thinking. This is a big point in my essay and it needs information from the text that I got it from. This would further develop my ideas with And thinking, and support my claims that i have about…
\ 2) In this article by Roxane Gay, she describes the idea of sisterhood in the context of feminism menacing. Sisterhood as it is in the article stands for, Good feminists who are “comporting themselves in sisterhood-approved ways.”(Gay) This definition sounds kind of scary in the sense that it almost sounds like a cult. People with the same beliefs, surrounded by people who enforce this belief. Feminism is not a cult, but as Gay describes the…
Throughout my drafts there were many major and minor changes to my introduction, my sources integrated, and my sentence structure. In my analysis of the multiple drafts I will show evidence of revision within different parts of my paper. Next i will start with showing the ideas from my classmates help improve my work. From then i will show growth through my homework assignments in my blog posts. Then i will show my comments on other classmate’s essays, aiding them…
Gee refresher
Copy every sentence that contains quotation, summary, and paraphrase Paraphrase Only to later become a literacy winner due to overcoming this problem and setting them better off. Only to become a literacy winner later due to overcoming their problem and learning from it. (342) This revision helps the reader make sense of the point i am making rather than having to read it multiple times to understand it. The shifting that Williams is talking about comes from idea that sponsors are the…
Coordination and Subordination Complex This is a shift in the person’s attitude throughout their narrative, changing from one type of thinking to another. In this sentence the subject of a person’s attitude is emphasize with a dependant clause and an independent clause. This is because the first part of the sentence is the explanation, which leads to a point which cannot be a sentence by itself. She describes her view from a victim’s standpoint which undergoes an identity shift…
Part 1 In my essay in include two scholarly sources that help push and help building along the idea that student identity shifts happen often, and can be heavily influenced by sponsors. From the beginning i mention the idea of sponsors, this idea can be seen throughout my essay. I believe my peers think that i would be adding to Brandt’s idea of a sponsor. I talk about sponsors as the root of or the main cause of an identity…
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